Colors Unfettered
demur flowers bloom
a tapestry stitched with spring
colors unfettered
on her chilly weather walks
old man winter cedes the day
It felt marvelous to write poetry once again for Colleen’s #TankaTuesday after months of absence. I love these Ekphrastic challenges. Ekphrastic poetry is written in response to a piece of art. Colleen chose this prompt after seeing it on Rebecca Budd’s blog: Chasing Art.
I wrote a tanka with syllable count 5/7/5/7/7. Here in Oregon, spring may be shy, but she’s on her way, and there’s no stopping her.
To read more responses to the challenge, learn about syllabic poetry, or submit your own poem, stop by Colleen’s blog: Wordcraft Poetry.
Myths of the Mirror 
I knew I knew that painting from somewhere. Chasing Art, of course… yay Rebecca.
Your poem is happily prophetic.
Thank you!
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It’s fun writing poetry for artwork, Resa, because I really have to slow down my brain and explore the piece. What does her expression say and her clothing? What story was the artist telling me? I love that and I feel more connected to the art. So fun! Thanks for the lovely comment, my friend. β€
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She looks cozy with a twinkle of spring in her eye! Great capture Diana! Hugs, C
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Thank you! And thanks for all the visits! This was a nice short one. I liked studying the artwork and imagining what the woman was thinking as well as what the artist was trying to convey. π Happy Wednesday, my friend.
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As I look out at our snow covered backyard, I can really appreciate the wonderful imagery of your poem, Diana. Well done!
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Thanks! I can imagine that Canada has a bit to go before that snowy backyard surrenders to spring. I really liked studying the painting and that coat! Colleen’s prompts are always fun. Stay warm, my friend.
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Yes, a bit more winter, but I love downhill skiing and other winter activities.
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Beautiful! I love this poem! I also enjoyed reading through the comments. The spring tapestry and the winter walk is just lovely…
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Thanks for swinging by, Linda. I liked the contrasts in the artwork and the woman’s unreadable expression. It left the door wide open. I’m glad you enjoyed the poem. π
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Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Exquisite, Diana. “old man winter cedes the day”–lovely bow to close the poem. β€οΈ
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I like a cooperative winter, Gwen. He’s very gracious in this poem. π Lol. I love writing for the prompts. And it’s February… spring will be here before we know it. β€ Hugs, my friend.
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Beautiful Tanka! I love the imagery that you use throughout the poem. Thank you so much for sharing π₯°
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Thanks for the visit and the lovely comment. π I enjoy writing for visual prompts. They’re so evocative. I’m delighted that you liked this one. Happy February!
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Youβre very welcome π happy February!
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I love how you have encased all four seasons in this poem ππ
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Thanks, Willow. That’s so kind of you to stop by and read. It’s a gorgeous prompt. Happy Writing!
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It really is isn’t it and everyone sees something different on it ππ
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I really, really, really like that last line in particular, Diana!
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David
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Thank you, David. I kind of like that too. It seems Old Man Winter always cedes the way to the youthful beauty of spring. I’m looking forward to it. π
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me too π
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What a beautiful tanka! Your words truly capture the essence of spring and the unfettered colors it brings. Your love for Ekphrastic poetry shines through in your writing. Thanks for sharing and participating in Colleen’s #TankaTuesday challenge. Can’t wait to see more of your poems. πΈ
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Thanks for the lovely comment, Idrees. I haven’t written for Colleen’s prompts in a long time and it was a joy to do so again! My goal is to participate in the ekphrastic challenges, at least. Have a great day and Happy Writing!
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Thank you so much for your kind response! I’m glad to hear that my comment made your day and inspired you to write again. Participating in Colleen’s prompts sounds like a great goal, I’m sure your writing will bring joy to others as well. Have a wonderful day and keep on writing! π
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Thanks for the fun prompt, Colleen. π
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a tapestry stitched with spring- beautiful, Diana!
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Thanks for stopping by, Jacqui. Always wonderful to see your name pop up. It’s a lovely prompt and I couldn’t resist. Have a lovely week, my friend. β€ β€ I hope all is well.
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Have a great week, friend.
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I like how your tanka captured spring from the coat and muff, and yet we feel the chill of winter. Happy Sunday, Diana!
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Thanks so much for stopping by to read, Mary, and for the kind comment. I liked the contrasts in the painting. And the subtle defiance in the woman’s choice of clothing. Have a wonderful week, my friend. β€
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Iβm so glad you are writing poetry once again, Diana. I know it makes you happy, and that makes me happy. I always love your interpretation of a prompt; you see what others donβt and write something unexpected. I love it! β€οΈ
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It does make me happy, Tanya, and I like the way writing poetry for a piece of artwork deepens my enjoyment of the art for me. I’m delighted that you liked my tanka. Thank you and huge hugs. β€
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I can’t believe I almost missed this beautiful poem, Diana! Luckily I scrolled through my emails and found this. Your response to the image was perfect–looking ahead to spring (aren’t we all?), and I learned something new: ekphrastic! Glad you are back to Tanka Tuesday!
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I’m so glad you enjoyed the poem, Terri. Writing for a piece of artwork draws me into the details and makes me look at it more deeply, seeking emotion and a story. Yes, I’m looking forward to winter stepping stepping side for spring. Another month and it will be March! Hang in there.
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The tanka and the painting work so beautifully together!
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Thanks, Suzanne. I like visual prompts. They draw me in and wake up the old noggin’ for some poetry or prose. Happy Sunday, my friend, and have a great week.
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Love the tanka. it’s excellent.
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Thanks so much for swinging by to read, Jude. I’m flattered that you enjoyed it. Have a great week.
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Such a pleasureπΌ
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A beautiful, enchanting tanka, Diana. Your poetry is brilliant and I hope to see more of it. I never got to experience spring or summer in Oregon (I was there for autumn and winter). I’ll bet it’s gorgeous. I wanted to mention I finally was able to purchase The Necromancer’s Daughter (Kindle version). I’m so excited to dive into it! Hope you’re doing well, my friend! π
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Oooh. You started my day with a smile on all counts, Mike. I’m glad you enjoyed the tanka, and I hope to write more poetry now that the new year seems to offer a little breathing room. π And I hope you enjoy the book! Thank you so much for picking it up and giving it a try. You’re a good friend. β€
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I love me some poetry π€€
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Thank you. Something short and sweet for the post. π Have a great week!
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