This poem is my attempt at a crapsey cinquain for Colleen’s #TankaTuesday. It’s inspired by Kerfe’s visual art above.
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Unknowable
starlight
stitched in patterns
weaves a vast universe
deciphering the mystical
with faith
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I’m on the road, hiking around here:
So, I may be a bit delayed with comments and visits. But I’ll catch up. Thanks for stopping by!
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Myths of the Mirror 
The road you’re on is beautiful literally and metaphorically. Great Tanka. Keep on keepin’ the faith. I rewrote my Asherah ode completely — I disliked the previous incarnation. This time I tried a whole new writing format — I’m not sure what’s it’s called — maybe prose poetry. 🙏
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Thanks so much for the lovely comment. I enjoy visual prompts and I enjoy the mystery of the universe… no need to attempt to sort it out. Revise as much as you like. Sometimes I think poetry is never finished, so revising seems natural to me. Happy Writing!
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Thanks for sharing the poem and image. I’m glad you enjoyed them. Have a great weekend. 🙂
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Thanks for sharing the poem. I’m glad you enjoyed it. Have a wonderful weekend!
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Love it!
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Thanks for stopping by, Mark. I love visual prompts and this one was so interesting. I hope you’re staying cool and enjoying the start to your summer. Happy Writing!
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