Another fresh take. I hope you enjoy Mich’s poem.



As i lay in bed last night
I dream of you and slept tight
And in my dream i got thump
I felt a huge gigantic hump
Over my shoulders
I shed some tears
I am pushed away
And off i stay

The banging
And thumping
I cried
It pains
It hurts

Woke up in a dream
Oh how my tears run in stream
I painfully cry
I could die
That huge gigantic hump
I felt i got thump
Was my heart beating in agony
You left me in dismay.


This is in response to Diana’s photo prompt for February – a Pixabay image by Marianne Sopala.
You can check out her February challenge here

February’s Speculative Fiction Prompt

I wanted to write something about the elephant and the cute little mice on its literal sense; but i realized it would be so much…

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18 thoughts on “Thump-poem

  1. Ocean Bream says:

    Wow what an interesting take on this! This prompt is so very intriguing, I am not surprised it elicits such a wide spectrum of responses.

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  2. I like Mich’s interpretation

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  3. Jordy says:

    Dreams can be so rough at times!!

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  4. Jina Bazzar says:

    Hmmm, i’m curious. what’s the image for this month?

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